For a story only a few pages long, it had just enough story packed into it for a few minute enjoyable read.
There was one error near the middle that jarred the flow momentarily. For a work as short as this, even one error can change the overall experience. Also, the ending was predictable enough mainly because there are many erotic stories out there with this exact ending. I felt that if I hadn’t read the last bit, my overall enjoyment would have been more.
But still, overall, it was worth checking out and if it’s a taste of this author’s other work, I’ll be see what else she has to offer.
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About the Author:
According to the East Bay Literary Examiner, Alison Tyler is “Erotica’s Own Superwoman.” She’s also been called a “literary siren” and a “Trollop with a Laptop.” Her work has appeared in over 100 anthologies, including Sex for America edited by Stephen Elliott, Purple Panties edited by Zane, and Best Women’s Erotica 2010 edited by Violet Blue. She is the editor of 50 erotic anthologies, including the Alison’s Wonderland (Harlequin, 2010), and the author of 25 naughty novels, including Melt With You (Cheek).
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